Colin Burrow (ed.), The Oxford Shakespeare: The Complete Sonnets and Poems
- Editor’s Note1Shall I compare thee to a summer's day?
- Editor’s Note2Thou art more lovely and more temperate:
- 3Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
- Editor’s Note4And summer's lease hath all too short a date;
- 5Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
- Editor’s Note6And often is his gold complexion dimmed,
- Editor’s Note7And every fair from fair sometime declines,
- Editor’s Note8By chance or nature's changing course untrimmed:
- 9But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
- Editor’s Note10Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow'st;
- Editor’s Note11Nor shall Death brag thou wand'rest in his shade,
- Editor’s Note12When in eternal lines to time thou grow'st.
- 13 So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
- Editor’s Note14 So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.
7 fair from … declines every beautiful thing loses its beauty; playing on the 'fairness' of the sun's gold complexion.
8 untrimmed 'deprived of trimness or elegance; stripped of ornament' (OED 1; first cited usage). Cf. K. John 3.1.134–5: 'the devil tempts thee here | In likeness of a new untrimmèd bride', where it has been suggested that the term means 'undevirginated' (Partridge) or 'recently divested of her wedding-gown' (Schmidt). 'Deprived of the ornaments of youth' would fit both contexts, as well as tallying with the influential passage from Revelation 21: 2: 'And I John saw the holy city new Jerusalem come down from God out of heaven, prepared as a bride trimmed for her husband.'
10 lose possession … ow'st Nor will you lose control over the beauty which you own absolutely and for ever. This contrasts with the impermanent lease of l. 4 above, and does so by emphatically linking possession with ownership. These terms are not synonymous in law. Possession (especially when applied to land or property) means occupancy or enjoyment of a piece of property in a manner which brings with it the right to exercise control over it, but it does not necessarily imply ownership; hence to enjoy something fully one must have both ownership and permanent possession of it.
11 wand'rest … shade alluding to Psalm 23: 4: 'Yea, though I should walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I will fear no evil: for thou art with me: thy rod and thy staff, they comfort me'.
12 eternal lines 'enduring lines of verse' and 'perpetual genealogical descent'; see 16.9 note.
to time thou grow'st you become a living part of time. To grow to is 'to be an organic or integral part of' (OED 3b), as in 2 Henry IV 1.2.85–90: 'Ser. I pray you, sir, then set your knighthood and your soldiership aside … Fal. I lay aside that which grows to me?' See Venus l. 540. The addressee of the poem is like a shoot grafted into time's substance, and continues to live through either the poet's lines or his own bloodline.
14 this 'this sonnet'